Kia ora and welcome back to another blog,
Over the past couple weeks in writing we have been writing a play based of well known fairy tales. Such as sleeping beauty, Snow white, The ugly duckling and so much more. I decided to base my fairytale of Cinderella but there was a twist. We had to change the story up a bit so it was different to the actual fairytale. I hope you enjoy reading my blog as much as I enjoyed making it 🙂
If you were to make this what fairytale would you base yours of?
Cinderella and the broken glass
Main Characters: Ella, Aunt lucy, Ashley, Veronica, Prince Albert,
(The story takes place in a Large Cottage with lots of Bush and rolling farmland around it)
Ella: (Holding her fathers hand)
Ella: Father, please don’t go
Ella’s father: There is no need to worry my dear, your aunt Lucy is coming to stay and your two lovely cousins Ashley and Veronica. They will take great care of you. ( Starts to cry ) My country needs me to fight in the army and protect others which includes you my love
Ella: (weeping) Promise me that you will come back?
Ella’s father: I will not always be there to protect you but I will be there to guide you.Let me tell you something my Father told me when I was your age. If you ever feel lost look at the stars because I will be watching you and guiding you (Hops in the carriage and drives away),
( Only a few minutes later a white carriage arrives in front of the stairs that leads up to the cottage that Ella has been sitting on watching as her father drives away in the carriage drawn by horses)
Ella: (Stands up and wipes the tears of her cheeks)
( As the carriage stops in front of the reasonably big couttge out walks two pale cheeked girls with pink and purple frilled dress)
Ella: ( in a polite voice) Hello I am Ell..
Ashley: (Starts chatting away to her sister about how weird Ella looks)
Veronica: (Also starts to whisper about Ella)
Veronica: (discussed) Eww I just got my new Gucci shoes stuck in this mud!!
( just as Ella is about to try to introduce herself to them again a rather tall skinny lady with dark black hair and a green emerald color dress appears from out of the carriage and stands before Ella in disapproval)
Aunt lucy: (In a posh voice) You must be Ella, I am your Aunt lucy and this is my two astonishing daughters Ashely and Veronica
(Ashley and Veronica push past Ella with there luggage and enter the house giggling and arguing about who would get what room)
Aunt lucy: (With a smirk on her face) My daughters have a lot of clothes and dresses so if you dont mind can you sleep in the attic so you don’t take up too much room?
Ella: (hesintiley) Yes Miss
Aunt lucy: Please call me Aunt lucy dear
(A few hours later when the sun had gone down Ella found herself on the cold hard floor of the attic. Suddenly Ella hears a squeaking sound and little paws skittering across the floor boards)
Ella: (Quickly gets up)
(Out of the corner of her eye she spots two little brown mice nibbling at a old crusted peace of bread lying on the floor)
Ella: (reaches her hand out to pet the mice) Hello my sweetys would you like to come with me and I can get you some grapes?
(The mouse sniff Ellas hand in approval as Ella gives them a pat on the back)
Ella: ( walks down the stairs that leads to the attic as the mouse follow her down the stairs)
(When ella walks into the kitchen she can hear plates crashing)
Ella: (Mutters under her breath) Who can that be at this time of night?
(As Ella walks into the kitchen she finds Jermole Aunt lucy’s cat rushing around the room chasing a little black mouse)
Ella: (Picks up Jermole and puts him outside)
Ella: ( Walks back into the kitchen and starts grabbing a plate and a vine of grapes from the fruit bowl. She places it on the ground and the three little mice run up to it and start nibbling at it)
(The next morning Ella wakes up to chatting voices)
Veronica: (Snobbish) Wake up I am hungry!
Ashley: Why are you sleeping by the fire?
(Ella wakes up to find she had fallen asleep by the fire and was covered in cinders. Ella must have got cold and fell asleep by the fire)
Aunt lucy: You are covered in Cinders!!
Ashley: (Starts laughing) We should call her…
Ashley and Veronica: (Giggling) Cinderella!!
(While Aunt lucy, Ashley and Veronica laugh over Ella’s new nickname name Ella gets of the floor and starts to dust herself of)
Aunt lucy: Cinderella, go get us some bread for breakfast from the town
(Ella walks to the local town to pick up some bread but once she arrives she sees one of the princes guards in the middle of the town)
Princes guard: (In a polish voice) Ladies and gentlemen the prince has requested everyone in the town is invited to the ball
(Ella walks up to a girl standing in a white cotton dress)
Ella: (Talking to the girl) Excuse me, but what is going on here?
The little girl: You didn’t come here? Prince Albert is putting on a ball and everyone is invited. He will choose one person from the ball to marry!
(Prince’s guard starts to hand out invites to the ball. Once Ella gets home she rushes into the house existed)
Ella: Aunt lucy? Ashley? Veronica? I have some news!
(Ashley and Veronica come rushing down the stairs)
Ashley: Oooo what is it! I hope you got the breed I am starving
Ella: No I didn’t get it sorry because I got distracted by the existing news I am about to tell you
Ashley: Aghh just tell us!
(Veronica snaches the invite out of her hand and starts to read it out loud)
Veronica: (Reading the invite) Dear people of Château town, you have been invited to Prince Albert’s ball where he will choose 1 lady who he shall marry…
Ashley and Veronica: (High pitched) Ekkkkkkk!
Veronica: I bet he will choose me!
Ashley: (annoyed) No me!!
(As Ashley and Veronica argue about who the prince will choose Aunt lucy walks into the room where the three girls are standing)
Aunt lucy: What is all this about?
Ella: (In an excited voice) The prince has invited us to the ball and he will choose one girl to marry
Aunt lucy: What do you mean?
Ella: You, Ashley, Veronica, and me…
Aunt lucy: (Laughing) You! Going to the ball. Haha what a joke!
Ella: (Sad) Why not? The prince said ALL is invited to the ball?
Aunt lucy: Because…The prince will not want a dirty filthy girl at his sophisticated ball
Ella: But..
Aunt lucy: NO BUTS! I said you are not going is that clear?
Ella: (Sad) Yes madam
Aunt lucy: Besides you can stay busy by cleaning up the house
To be continued….